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the man
The man was parched after all the cotton he had collected being unable to rely the kindness of his ruler.
Him and all his companions withdrew the field once night has fallen to the little cabin.
Everyone were knackered after worked flat out.
The same rite take place every day, the slave trader checked each bags; weight up and made the ranking.
The one among the team who had made the lightest bag will get twenty whip in his back and having no food for the evening.
The joy wasn't present in the man's heart since a long time leaving room at the fear and eternal sadness.

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- The man was parched after all the cotton he had collected being unable to rely the kindness of his ruler.
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- Him and all his companions withdrew the field once night has fallen to the little cabin.
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- Everyone were knackered after worked flat out.
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- The same rite take place every day, the slave trader checked each bags; weight up and made the ranking.
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- The one among the team who had made the lightest bag will get twenty whip in his back and having no food for the evening.
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- The joy wasn't present in the man's heart since a long time leaving room at the fear and eternal sadness.
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