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  • Hi, My name's Marie and I'm living in Lyon to France.
  • I want to study and learn English because my level is very bad.
  • When I travel, I can't speak with the people, so I want upgrate in this language.
  • I'm 28 years old, I'm nutritionnist and I work with the patient has place of residence and with a artificial nutrition.
  • I hope to have answer and I hope progresss with you. See you soon. Marie

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