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  • Bullfight

  • I would like to speak out about bullfight.
  • A friend of mine has asked me what I think about bullfight.
  • And indeed, it can be a controversial topic in Spain because there are a lot of people who are on favour and opposed of it.
  • Although I disagree killing animals or hurt them.
  • I am able to understand that there are people who likes bullfight.
  • As there are people who likes hunting or fishing.
  • For many years, in Spain has existed (and currently is legal) bullfight and it’s a tradition that Spanish people has.
  • I am conscious that this tradition as many other which also exists can be reconsider but its something that little by little must be changed and we teach our next generations why is better or not but forbidding it by laws it might not be the best option.
  • In conclusion as I said I don’t like bullfight and I am not agree with that practice neither but I would like to finish with a question: are there in your country or culture any tradition questionable by ethics rights?

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    • And indeed, it can be a controversial topic in Spain because there are a lot of people who are on favour and opposed of it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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    • For many years, in Spain has existed (and currently is legal) bullfight and it’s a tradition that Spanish people has.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • I am conscious that this tradition as many other which also exists can be reconsider but its something that little by little must be changed and we teach our next generations why is better or not but forbidding it by laws it might not be the best option.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • In conclusion as I said I don’t like bullfight and I am not agree with that practice neither but I would like to finish with a question: are there in your country or culture any tradition questionable by ethics rights?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9