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get a job
In two months I'm moving to London but my English is not pretty good.
First I will looking for a flatmate then a job.
I'm a bit stressed because of my English level, if I don't get a job quickly.
But I'm motivated to get one.
By the way, I know a girl who found a job even if her English is not good.
So if she was able to get a job, I could get one!!

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- In two months I'm moving to London but my English is not pretty good.
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- First I will looking for a flatmate then a job.
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- I'm a bit stressed because of my English level, if I don't get a job quickly.
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- But I'm motivated to get one.
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- By the way, I know a girl who found a job even if her English is not good.
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- So if she was able to get a job, I could get one!!
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