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  • Welcome in our travel agency.
  • As a result of your demand, we organized you 7 exeptional days to tour the country.
  • We’ve gathered the best of France in order to make your holiday unforgetable.
  • Thus you’ll travel threw the country and you’ll discover the herritage, the gastronomy and places that can’t be ignored.
  • You’ll take off in the airport of NY, and on the morning of the frist day you’ll land near Paris where a taxi driver will wait for you, and he will guide you threw the capital during 2 days.
  • First you’ll visit the Eiffel tower where you’ll be able to admire the breathtaking sight of Paris.
  • At the end of the morning you’ll go to the Champs-Elysées where there are plenty of shops, and some good restaurants to eat at lunch.
  • On the afternoon you’ll discover the palais Garnier which is the famous opera in Paris, and the authentic square of Montmartre and you’ll visit the beautiful Sacré-coeur basilica situated on the hightest point of Paris.
  • On the evening you’ll have dinner on a tourist river boat on the Seine that will guide you threw Paris by night.

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    • Thus you’ll travel threw the country and you’ll discover the herritage, the gastronomy and places that can’t be ignored.
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    • You’ll take off in the airport of NY, and on the morning of the frist day you’ll land near Paris where a taxi driver will wait for you, and he will guide you threw the capital during 2 days.
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    • At the end of the morning you’ll go to the Champs-Elysées where there are plenty of shops, and some good restaurants to eat at lunch.
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    • On the afternoon you’ll discover the palais Garnier which is the famous opera in Paris, and the authentic square of Montmartre and you’ll visit the beautiful Sacré-coeur basilica situated on the hightest point of Paris.
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    • On the evening you’ll have dinner on a tourist river boat on the Seine that will guide you threw Paris by night.
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