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Text from Raissa3114 - English

  • WRITING SECTION : TOEFL

  • Assemble a group of people for a mission, like to make a project, can be good for some persons and a bed thing to others.
  • There is no doubt.
  • When more than one people is responsible por a task, more ideas will appear and more the group will discuss about the topic.This whole process can be good for increase the member's knowledge.
  • In addition, because of the ideas fluxes, a group can work more quickly than just one person.
  • For other hand, sometimes the effect is not the wished.
  • Some members can get a "free rode" because even they do not contributing to the group, they can get a reward.
  • It is very important to say that, sometimes, the can take a long time to be finished because to find a consensus between the members of the group can be really hard.
  • That way, it is very important to have in mind the pros and cons of a group's assemble.

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