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Text from Manon001 - English

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  • After a night in a hotel, you’ll visit the Louvre Museum, where you’ll be able to admire the Joconde from De Vinci or sculptures of Antiquity for instance.
  • In the afternoon you’ll go to the château de Versailles, where you’ll visit the French garden and the palace of course, with its famous Hall of Mirrors.
  • In the evening you’ll take the train to the seaside resort Deauville in Normandie on the west coast of France.
  • In the morning of the third day you’ll be free to discover the city.
  • I suggest you to take a walk in the streets to admire the architecture of the traditional houses with wood, the facades of villas of the high-society of the Belle époque.
  • As you may know Normandie is famous for the landings during the 2nd World War.
  • Thus you’ll discover the Normandy American Cemetery and Memorial next to Omaha beach, and then you’ll go to the Pointe du Hoc where the marks of fightings are still visibled.
  • On the evening you’ll take the train on your way to the Mont St Michel a little island where you’ll stay overnight in a hotel.

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    • After a night in a hotel, you’ll visit the Louvre Museum, where you’ll be able to admire the Joconde from De Vinci or sculptures of Antiquity for instance.
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    • In the afternoon you’ll go to the château de Versailles, where you’ll visit the French garden and the palace of course, with its famous Hall of Mirrors.
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    • I suggest you to take a walk in the streets to admire the architecture of the traditional houses with wood, the facades of villas of the high-society of the Belle époque.
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    • Thus you’ll discover the Normandy American Cemetery and Memorial next to Omaha beach, and then you’ll go to the Pointe du Hoc where the marks of fightings are still visibled.
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    • On the evening you’ll take the train on your way to the Mont St Michel a little island where you’ll stay overnight in a hotel.
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