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  • Women Role

  • Fertility and mortality rates are very important for countries future and to keep this rates in balance we need educated women again.
  • In my country young population is high but actually the reason is unconscious breeding.
  • When we look at the background we can understand that the key point is education again.
  • For example, especially the East side of Turkey Republic fertility rates is very high.
  • There are lots of kid brides.
  • They don't allow to go to school.
  • They have seen as a only wife who cooks, cleans home and gives births.
  • Men don't want to awake these women, so they try to be determinative rules as a customary like ''girls don't need education''.
  • These factors cause fertility problems.
  • On the other hand, educated women can decrease the mortality rates.
  • As an example, think about a mother who is knowledgable about healthy lifestyle.
  • She eats healthy also cooks healthy so, it will affect all family members eating habits and may increase their lifetime.
  • Mothers also have a big role for future, they educate children.
  • One of my favouriate quote is ''If you educate a man; you educate a man.
  • If you educate a woman; you educate a generation.'' from Brigham Young.
  • This explain how important women education is, because our first teacher is our mothers.
  • They convey their knowledges, attitudes, behaviours to us.
  • Conscious mother will raise conscious children.
  • As an illustration, mostly well educated people's parents also have a good personal background.
  • To sum up, educated women is important for communities in every respect.
  • Women keep balances in societies about literacy,welfareifertility even mortality rates.
  • They shouldn't remain passive.
  • Women can fire a gun with a good education.
  • They designate our future with children.

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