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  • Example an informal email about a new gadget Iheve just bought.

  • Dear Peter: How are you?
  • I hpe you have passed the test tthat you have told me last time we met.
  • I am sure you got it!!.
  • What about your parents?Are they well?
  • And your siblings?
  • Tellme about them, please!
  • Well, I am so happy, first of all because I have just bought a new smartphone.
  • It is bthe new BQ model named “ Aquarius M5” .
  • It is not too big black one.
  • I love his camera and the panoramic view and the way to make selfies.
  • As you know, I use the mobile phone a lot, so I am glad about it .
  • Do you know this model?
  • How do you feel about my last purchase?
  • When me meet again , I hope the next week, I will show you it and we can speak each other about other things. Regards.

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