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  • Space and exchange

  • I would like to speak about the concept „Space and Exchange“.
  • By the electronic interlinking and the globalisation one can have the feeling that the world has become a village.
  • This fact brings hopes for a better world with itself, but also fears.
  • How will this globalized world probably develop?
  • At first one might ask what how can you say that our world has become a village?
  • Today, with the rapid changes of technolologie and telecommunications have can quickly communicate and be in touch with the world .
  • The new communicative devices (Internet, mobile phones. . .
  • ) therefore allow us to be more open to the world .
  • One can find many more things quickly and can also get the world's information in time very current .
  • Today all countries of the world are integrated and can easily lead information .
  • We live in a connected world.
  • One can also speak of a reduction of space.
  • The world has become "smaller".
  • In fact , people are increasingly mobile .
  • They easily travel for work or for studies.
  • Transport costs are becoming more accessible to people.
  • There is also an international cooperation between industry, for example, Airbus.
  • All this causes a contact and a mixture of the cultures.
  • In a second step we will focus on the borders of globalization and the fear of loss of identity.
  • The identity would be dropped in the global village in favour of a collective identity.
  • People are so afraid of the homogeneity of cultures.
  • There are reactions to these fears.
  • Words like " denationalization " are used to describe the power and the loss of the state in globalization.
  • There is a tension field between the globalisation and the regionalisation.
  • Moreover, anti- globalization demonstration protesting all over the world.
  • The goal is denounced inequality increasingly important in the world .
  • Finally we ask what is the future for the global world?
  • To conduct this reflection must get to be in the positive side of globalization but also in the negative.
  • Indeed one hand it is an advantage for the newly industrialized countries with a clear comparative advantage in terms of cost of production and labor and on the other hand there is a disadvantage with deindustrialisation savings which causes the destruction of the secondary sector jobs that are essential to the balance of the economy.
  • The crisis in our industrialized countries for twenty years and is growing dangerously in Europe today, forces us to reconsider the current model and have the courage to dare new ways freely, without the influence of liberal ideology or protectionist.
  • By the linked up world we have the impression that we form "one single world".
  • We carry almost all jeans, eat Almost Food, hear World Music. . .
  • Today by the quick spreading of information we better know about the world and it is easier to maintain international relations.
  • This increasing river in information wakes up the curiosity and the interest in the world.
  • The solidarity is thereby strengthened and there is a chance that prejudices are lighter got rid.

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