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  • Essay about the re-education or jail.

  • When I was younger, I though that the human race was for its own nature “good”.
  • I mean, the man when he was born, is plenty of goodwill’s and there is their real nature.
  • But due to economics and cultural determinants, their behavior could turn off to the wrong side.
  • Consequently, the mission of a government should be the re-education, bringing them the opportunity to come back to the right way.
  • But, thought the years have passed, I have changed a bit my mind in order to these reasons: Firstly, and it is a point hard to admit, everyone is not good.
  • We cannot trust in the peopleas considered in a global way.
  • Unfortunately there is not the real nature of the human race.
  • Because of this fact, due to mental diseases, I do not why, but a government cannot take the premise that the human being is good by nature.
  • Secondly, the social and economics determinant that I have exposed before, are stronger then I thought a few years ago.
  • There are strong enough to make a different person.
  • Sometimes you cannot change the way one person has been educated.
  • As a conclusion, I want to say that in my opinion, the general rule should be the re-education, but we must not forget that in many occasions, there is no choice than jail.

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