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Text from vaness182 - English

  • Problems of the education,

  • Corrupt politicians, the money is lost while pass in the bureaucrats hands , and the state doesn't surveillance.
  • Lack of resources, and the state send fewer resources.
  • Lack of education from the parents, when one parent has a grade of university, is more probability that the sons get some degree.
  • How it is evidence?
  • Bad results in world test about education like pisa test, also the local test results hasn't a good balance.
  • Its consequences?
  • The girls and boys stay in the street all day.
  • Increment the poverty because the poverty are inversely proportional to the nivel to education.
  • Possible solution: Force to parents to send the childrens to the school, if is need make laws.
  • Build where is necesary and expand existing schools and gardens.
  • Expand benefits for the kids and youngs such as free public education.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English