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  • Advantages or disadvantages of social networks.

  • From some time to now, social networks has become more and more populars.
  • They are not only a way to entertainment but also they can be used to find a job, learning languages and in so many ways.
  • This revolution has pros and cons.
  • Firstly, in the area of the pros, social networks has changed the way people can communicate each other.
  • Some years ago If you want to know about an old friend from school, it was more difficult to find his trail.
  • But now you just have to put his name in Facebook, as an example, and “voila” here he is.
  • It seems to me fantastic!!
  • Therefore, gives you the opportunity to know people from all over the world.
  • Secondly, I want to speak about the cons.
  • In my opinion, the main inconvenient that I find is about their use.
  • I am a mother, I have three children.
  • Frequently I get astonished when I see how use make some mother of my same age of the social networks.
  • I think that the kid’s opinion should be born i9n mind specially if you want to up photos to some site.
  • it is a very sensible matter, as a they cannot defend by ourselves.
  • As a conclusion, I consider that social networks has more advantages than disadvantages.
  • But at the same time, its use can be dangerous, even harmful.

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