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Text from MR-GLOT - English

  • are mobile phones suited?

  • Are mobile phones necessaries?
  • Nowadays its very often people use mobile phone and we have millions of apps for phone which help us from remember what I have to do tomorrow to manage what kind of food I should eat.
  • That and others reasons explain why it is so important mobile phone in our daily life.
  • Technology is very useful and they help us to live much better.
  • And specially mobile phones let us a huge number of possibilities such us keep on contact with your friends or family without spending much money, call or being called wherever, watch videos, share pictures, check weather or ever open files if you need it.
  • They have quick systems and you might have many apps in your phone which will be useful for you.
  • By other site, they could become a problem if you do not use them with caution.
  • Mobile phones are addictive and you can even lose communicative skills or change your night schedule.
  • I think that mobile phones are necessary but you cannot forget using them with responsibility.
  • They cannot replace face to face conversation and they are not designed for children.

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