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  • Зверополис/Zootopia

  • we visited cartoon Zootopia yesterday. besides good graphics, marvelous plot and funny jokes I like the hidden meaning in it. try everything sings shakira on backstage. actually, small rabbit Judy hobs or carrot called by fox nick inspires by perseverance and believe in dream. it goes against itself kind, circumstances. it rebels against everyone and wins. its behavior makes think about the most important things in your life and try every things

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    • we visited cartoon Zootopia yesterday. besides good graphics, marvelous plot and funny jokes I like the hidden meaning in it. try everything sings shakira on backstage. actually, small rabbit Judy hobs or carrot called by fox nick inspires by perseverance and believe in dream. it goes against itself kind, circumstances. it rebels against everyone and wins. its behavior makes think about the most important things in your life and try every things
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