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Jousif (으)로 부터 도착한메세지 - English

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Hello everyone How are you ?
I hope you are good My name is Jousif I'm 27 I use this program for the first time , Because i want to learn the english conversation ' I like it .
And i like to make friends speak english .
I wish that you will help me in my writing .

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- Please correct the mistake
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 제목
문장 1
- Hello everyone How are you ?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I hope you are good My name is Jousif I'm 27 I use this program for the first time , Because i want to learn the english conversation ' I like it .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- And i like to make friends speak english .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I wish that you will help me in my writing .
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4