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  • The story

  • - We will discuss very interesting story about Alison Fowler.
  • She became a team leader by gaining the new position.
  • But she encountered resistance to change in her new team, along with a lack of cooperation and loyalty.
  • Some members of the team maintained their loyalty to their previous manager and resented the promotion of the new team leader.
  • Few members drew up a list of complaints about Alison which they presented to her boss.
  • Finally she was unable to continue working for the organization due to the development of a psychiatric condition.
  • What do you think about this story?
  • - I think bad relationship with colleagues is the main problem in this story.
  • Alison had many causes for stress such as disagreements with colleagues, lack of understanding, unfriendly attitude, rude behavior, etc. A part of these causes breaks ethical standards.
  • Unfriendly attitude and rude behavior the biggest ethics issue in this story.
  • A good relationship between leader and subordinates is very important for successful work.
  • Can you give any advice for Alison?
  • - Yes, of course.
  • The first, she can complain to the Director, but it is very strange solution for good leader.
  • The second, she can make a contract with colleagues.
  • For example, she can offer money for good attitude.
  • Also she can find another job or take a break and live with parents.
  • And finally, she can make friends with colleagues.
  • It is the best solution for this situation.
  • - I agree with you.
  • For success she needs good friends at office.
  • I suppose if she studied psychology and expanded knowledge about management she would be more pleasant leader for her colleagues.
  • Also she can make a party for them.
  • It is best way to success.
  • -I agree with you.
  • If she made it she would be team leader at now.
  • But she was unable to continue working for the organization due to the development of a psychiatric condition.
  • Thank you for your help.
  • Dear friends, if you have any question you can ask it.
  • We ready for answering.
  • Thank you for your attention

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