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20.3
I talked with the two new guys, Samir and Zainelabdin in the morning.
Samir is from Algeria and his brother from Soudan.
Zainelabdin can speack both English and French and his brother speack Frech, they came frome canada.
I went outside in the afternoon for a walk in the common, I had a very nice moment, listened music and appreciated the weather.
When I went back home we discussed all together and Mimi phoned my on my cellphone we spoke about her operation and my English course.

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- I talked with the two new guys, Samir and Zainelabdin in the morning.
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- Samir is from Algeria and his brother from Soudan.
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- Zainelabdin can speack both English and French and his brother speack Frech, they came frome canada.
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- I went outside in the afternoon for a walk in the common, I had a very nice moment, listened music and appreciated the weather.
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- When I went back home we discussed all together and Mimi phoned my on my cellphone we spoke about her operation and my English course.
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