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  • Don't you think it's too much?

  • Hi fellows, I hope you are doing well.
  • Today I want to talk about what has happened recently.
  • We’ve learned that during timeskip there was a war between two pirate crews.
  • Yeah, I am talking about the “payback” war and especially Marco’s revenge.
  • So I felt compelled to do this thread regarding his character.
  • First off all I feel sorry for him, it’s sad to lost your father, your brothers, your comrades, .
  • But Oda-sensei didn’t stop only on that, and he decided to make him and his crew feel another stressful feelings.
  • All of this stuff I found unduly treatment toward Marco’s character.
  • Does he really deserve it?
  • Does he really deserve to be injured so much?
  • Does he really deserve to live through all of this pain and sufferings?
  • Don’t you guys think it was unfairly from Oda’s side regarding his character?
  • Or it is the way how Oda-sensei tries to show us how dangerous New World is?

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