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Text from Adrian_200 - English

  • Computer- friend or enemy

  • It is commonly known that people on the whole world use computers.They have tremendous impact for our life.
  • Computers are used by individual users and big companies.
  • However using computers haven't only advantages but also drawbacks.
  • Development run in unknown direction.
  • Maybe world will be as similar as film "Terminator".
  • Therefore are computers good or not?
  • In the first place Internet is full of information.
  • You can browse many things in moment.
  • You have access to more information than USA president twenty years ago.
  • For example you can find out quickly where you can buy specified item, or what other people think about your dentist.
  • You can find the shortest way to any point on map, or check cinemas repertoire.
  • Secondly computer is source of entertainment.
  • It is full of music, games, chats, films, gossips.
  • You can develop your hobbies through Internet.
  • You can speak with people, who have similar interests as you.
  • You can read about cars if you like it and so forth.
  • Another benefit is that you can learn in Internet.
  • You can develop your language, technical, mathematics skills through Internet.
  • Many things is free.
  • Others you can buy if you need.
  • Finally Internet is medium of communication.
  • You can contact with other people by Skype, Facebook and others.
  • However it needs to be added that computer is addicting.
  • People lose their time browsing useless Web pages.
  • Its particularly dangerous for children but not only.
  • Bonds of relationship are broken on account of computers.
  • Besides Internet and games contain aggression and pornography and it is impossible protect children.
  • It can perturb their develop.
  • They can be source of problems in their later life.
  • Thirdly when you spend many hours front of computer, you spoil your sight.
  • Finally sometimes information in Internet are false or obsolete or you can be hacker's victim.
  • To sum up I can tell that future will be belong to computers.
  • Nearly nobody can exist without computer.
  • Is impossible to stop development.
  • If you can't use computer your life will be harder.
  • You should be careful and use antivirus and anti malware software and protect your passwords.

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