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  • First Trip

  • It would be my first holiday abroad.
  • I really want to travel around the world, I hope after this moment I'll become braver to be traveler, now.. what am I supposed to do ?
  • I'm so happy because I want it would be happen for a long time.
  • I want to make friends with many people around the world.
  • now.. i am searching for some clue.. what clue ? clue for directions maybe.. directions for two place that i want to go..

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