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hel me!
hi everybody!i'm italian and i would like to improve my english.If someone is interested in conversation i could teach italian.my skype contact is bleff79.see you soon bye

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- hi everybody!i'm italian and i would like to improve my english.If someone is interested in conversation i could teach italian.my skype contact is bleff79.see you soon bye
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