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hmm..=÷='
I have free plane tickets to Hong Kong and Beijing - China..
Yippie~ I'll enjoy 6 nights for sightseeing, tasting some delicious cuisine and trying to find Chinese Language Course Programme at there

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- hmm..=÷='
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- I have free plane tickets to Hong Kong and Beijing - China..
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Yippie~ I'll enjoy 6 nights for sightseeing, tasting some delicious cuisine and trying to find Chinese Language Course Programme at there
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2