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George's day
Let's discover George's day !
Every morning, George wakes up at 7.
He receives his doctors who verify hi is in good health.
Then he makes a dry toilette and starts getting dressed.
While he gets dressed the members of his family come to his room to say hello.
After this he has a brought for breakfast and he receives his friend in his room.
He talks with them while he finishes dressing, putting his gloves for example.
It is 10 AM when he goes to play football with his friends.
They all have the same trainer who comes to George's house.
When training is finished he goes to his studio to do his work for about one hour or two.

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- George's day
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- Let's discover George's day !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Every morning, George wakes up at 7.
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句子 3
- He receives his doctors who verify hi is in good health.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- Then he makes a dry toilette and starts getting dressed.
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句子 5
- While he gets dressed the members of his family come to his room to say hello.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- After this he has a brought for breakfast and he receives his friend in his room.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- He talks with them while he finishes dressing, putting his gloves for example.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- It is 10 AM when he goes to play football with his friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- They all have the same trainer who comes to George's house.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9
句子 10
- When training is finished he goes to his studio to do his work for about one hour or two.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10