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It is not a good idea to tell her about grandfather's illness because she will be very upset.You don't need to help your daughter, she would manage her homework by herself.
There is no need to buya new furcoat,because she has a good one that her husband presented her on the burthday.

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- It is not a good idea to tell her about grandfather's illness because she will be very upset.You don't need to help your daughter, she would manage her homework by herself.
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- There is no need to buya new furcoat,because she has a good one that her husband presented her on the burthday.
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