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Text from Silveiralucas - English

  • Poker

  • Hi, my name is Lucas, I’m 29 and I have a wife and a 2 months old daughter to share my attention.
  • First of all, I never played poker before.
  • Then I decided to start with high quality technics to play a solid poker.
  • It is not a game or entertainment for me, and I don’t want to spend my time to find or to create theories that have already been created.
  • This is a serious way to make money and an opportunity for a life change… There is my time line on poker, I am committed to update it at least once a month.
  • November 2015: a friend told me that another friend was playing online poker.
  • Well, it was the same to heard him saying “so and so is donating money on the web”.
  • Then I created an account on pokerstar to check it out.
  • It took me some time (and ) to understand how things work on the poker world: rules, rooms, strategies, hands, ranges, bets… even the basic things were new to me.
  • December 2015: I started looking for the best way to learn how to play a solid poker.
  • I found a few options, but a coaching program is by far the best.
  • I realized that, despite that I want to make money from poker, I would not get 12 hours playing a tournament for a million dollars .
  • So I decided that I would play cash games.
  • NOBS seems to be the most fair deal for me.
  • January 2016: I made a plan to earn some money for security deposity, BR and PT4.
  • February 2016: Stop it!
  • My daughter was born!
  • And money bagged!
  • March 2016: I had nose surgery and now I'm recovering.
  • I signed up CFP and started to study materials.
  • This month I start to play my first 10k hands.

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