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Text from EderCosta - English

  • Help and friendship

  • Hello!
  • I would like a help to improve my English and also wanted to make some friends.
  • I'm from bahia, I'm 25 years old and the only intention I have here in Polyglot is refines and learn English with a native, who is really willing to help and make a new friend And so can exchange knowledge about the culture and customs of our countries

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English