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correct me, please
I'm simple man.
In currently I learn English language and i have some progress.
I like watch the films of horror and listen a music.
I want find many foreign friends.

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- correct me, please
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句子 1
- I'm simple man.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- In currently I learn English language and i have some progress.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I like watch the films of horror and listen a music.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I want find many foreign friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4