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  • A modern town centre.

  • Modern city centre.
  • Many people, hearing about council plans to pedestrianise city centre, are afraid, that it will be a death sentence for local business and shops.
  • But examples all over the world show different results.
  • Towns' and cities' centres closed for cars are very lively parts.
  • People walk along the streets, not afraiding of cars, which may hit them, just after buying those luxury perfums...
  • The restaurants have now space to put out some tables and in the season people may enjoy their meals and drinks in the sun.
  • There is no close polution from cars, so they can breath fresh air.
  • There is no noise, so they can easily talk with each others without hearing aid necessary.
  • All closed for cars streets are full of people, who slowly walk, watching all shops' windows and entering, if they will see something interesting.
  • They have more stress about small children, because there are no cars.
  • They can play their games while adults could talk serious topics about the weather and recent politics.
  • Other thing – going by bus is more relaxing sometimes.
  • You do not need to spend an hour watching for free parking space.
  • You do not need to leave your friends just because you have to repark your car after an hour.
  • It is also good for socialising.
  • In the bus you might meet a fun of same books you read.
  • Do you remember commuting to school and all those topics about life you was talking about with other school people?
  • You will not miss cars in your town centre for sure, and local business and shops will even grow without them.

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