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Now Pavel has som serious problems at yis work.
He's afraid of being fired.
This play doesn't work, although thevactors play great. Call me! Stay in touch!

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- Mistakes
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句子 1
- Now Pavel has som serious problems at yis work.
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句子 2
- He's afraid of being fired.
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句子 3
- This play doesn't work, although thevactors play great. Call me! Stay in touch!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3