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  • Wars

  • It's commonly believed that wars are source of many bad things.
  • However they still bursts into and goes on.
  • What are causes?
  • First and foremost source of wars is economy.
  • There is huge arms industry.
  • In addition often winner take natural resources as oil, gas and so forth.
  • Other source of wars are historic events.
  • For example my country has territories which was German through many ages.
  • On the other hand Lithuania's territories was Polish through hundreds years.
  • It can be cause of conflicts.
  • There are often civil wars, when in one country are different religions, nationalities, tribes or enemies parties.
  • Wars change lives of millions people.
  • The worst consequences is: dead, wounds, disabilities.
  • People stay homeless, hungry and without the good future.
  • They have to desert their houses and look for luck in others countries.

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