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  • hi, everybody!nice to meet you all. i reallyfor the first time, i'm just gonna write about my country ,Indonesia. for most of developed country out there, Indonesia maybe is just another poor developing country which still encounter with some economic and social issue.
  • Maybe you all heard Indonesia only when there's a bom or natural disaster or conflict or any other bad news. well, maybe in the past we could be proud with our badminton achievements, but now we lack of victory and title.
  • but, as a true Indonesian (although my dad is Chinese, i'm still proud to call myself a true Indonesian) I can't help but to love this country. different from popular belief that we are a poor country, for me, my country is so rich. can you believe that we have more that 400 tribes here and hundreds languages spoken?
  • (well, i found this fact in the internet..) from traditional languages to slang and profanity. hehe. and also not to forget to mention how beautiful Indonesia is.
  • if you heard about terrorist in Indonesia, please believe that we, as an indonesian, never agreed with their actions. we (and i believe all people) never think that killing innocent people can bring peace in the world or even get you to heaven.
  • that's all from me.
  • Have a good day, everybody.. God bless

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    • hi, everybody!nice to meet you all. i reallyfor the first time, i'm just gonna write about my country ,Indonesia. for most of developed country out there, Indonesia maybe is just another poor developing country which still encounter with some economic and social issue.
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    • Maybe you all heard Indonesia only when there's a bom or natural disaster or conflict or any other bad news. well, maybe in the past we could be proud with our badminton achievements, but now we lack of victory and title.
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    • but, as a true Indonesian (although my dad is Chinese, i'm still proud to call myself a true Indonesian) I can't help but to love this country. different from popular belief that we are a poor country, for me, my country is so rich. can you believe that we have more that 400 tribes here and hundreds languages spoken?
      Stem nu!
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    • (well, i found this fact in the internet..) from traditional languages to slang and profanity. hehe. and also not to forget to mention how beautiful Indonesia is.
      Stem nu!
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    • if you heard about terrorist in Indonesia, please believe that we, as an indonesian, never agreed with their actions. we (and i believe all people) never think that killing innocent people can bring peace in the world or even get you to heaven.
      Stem nu!
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