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  • Title: Not Out of the Woods Yet Our survival depends on our capacity to create an economic and social system grounded in a new set of values that reflects Thoreau’s ideas of simplicity, love and respect for nature, and personal development.
  • However, we will probably not get serious about ecology until some major catastrophe hits the developed world, then we might assume that something needs to change; meanwhile the vast majority of us will keep worshiping our IPhones and throwing trash to the sea.
  • If people lived in “quiet desperation” in 1854, how are we living now?
  • The modern world is certainly insane: many people live miserably working long hours for little money and many of those who are economically stable live depressed in conformity.
  • Nevertheless, who are we to judge whether a life has been well or badly lived?
  • Life is life, there is not purpose beyond the mere act of living, and any attempt to make sense out of life is naïve.
  • Accept your fate, embrace your sorrow as you do with your happiness, and never stop yourself from feeling.

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    • Title: Not Out of the Woods Yet Our survival depends on our capacity to create an economic and social system grounded in a new set of values that reflects Thoreau’s ideas of simplicity, love and respect for nature, and personal development.
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    • However, we will probably not get serious about ecology until some major catastrophe hits the developed world, then we might assume that something needs to change; meanwhile the vast majority of us will keep worshiping our IPhones and throwing trash to the sea.
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    • The modern world is certainly insane: many people live miserably working long hours for little money and many of those who are economically stable live depressed in conformity.
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    • Life is life, there is not purpose beyond the mere act of living, and any attempt to make sense out of life is naïve.
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