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Well, marketing always catchs me.
In my marketing courses I always have fun so, I decided to write about ''Global Marketing Trends''.
Technology keeps developing and serves us unpredictible results.
It is a big opportunity for marketing but needs new techniques to survive.
You don't need to big papers or tv commercials to advertise your product as much as you needed in the past.
Almost everyone have a smartphone and that serves us being in the digital word easily.
So, especially I will focus on digital marketing.
If you want to be successfull in this area you have to follow the trends.
In addition, I am still taking marketing courses in our university so, I believe that this research will contribute to my grade.

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- Well, marketing always catchs me.
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문장 2
- In my marketing courses I always have fun so, I decided to write about ''Global Marketing Trends''.
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- Technology keeps developing and serves us unpredictible results.
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- It is a big opportunity for marketing but needs new techniques to survive.
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문장 5
- You don't need to big papers or tv commercials to advertise your product as much as you needed in the past.
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- Almost everyone have a smartphone and that serves us being in the digital word easily.
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- So, especially I will focus on digital marketing.
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- If you want to be successfull in this area you have to follow the trends.
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- In addition, I am still taking marketing courses in our university so, I believe that this research will contribute to my grade.
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