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  • Thinking about the area of my academic interests, I began to consider the programs.
  • Instead of further qualifying on international relations, I chose to study economics.
  • The reason of my decision is a close interrelation between the international economy and international political processes.
  • Despite the fact that the world economy and, in particular, international trade and economic relations, are not direct objects of policy studying, they can be considered within it.
  • This is explained by the fact that the economy is the determining factor in international relations.
  • Thus, in the context of globalization international economic relations are one of the key areas of research of modern theories of international relations and world politics.
  • Consequently, economic education I consider as a determinant part of my education in the field of international relations.
  • Being a candidate for admission to the master's program, I can not help but look at all opportunities offered by the ** University.
  • Firstly, getting higher education in English gives me opportunity to compete with other international students.
  • Further, the knowledge of professional language will allow me to cooperate and communicate with specialists in the world.
  • Secondly, the University has a great prestige that helps its students to become valuable personnel.
  • And thirdly, the knowledge gained in the ** University, will enable me to become a competent expert, due to strict requirements for students and development many useful skills.
  • Master's Program will develop my analytic and statistical capabilities that will also enable me to build a career as a professional economist.
  • Besides studying economy as a contiguous science with the science of international relations, I am also attracted to become a business and financial consultant.
  • In my opinion, this is a profession that demonstrates analytic skills to the greatest extent.
  • I have always been inspired by people who are able to develop a financial strategy for the customer, to solve all his financial problems, predict the revenues and expenses of the company, to conduct statistics.
  • That is why I can not and I do not want to exclude the possibility of career development in this direction.
  • As of today, not having started studying, I can not definitely say in which of these two areas will be built my career.
  • With certainty I can only say that I will always seek for professional growth and self-development and I will make every effort to achieve my goal.
  • Getting a master's degree, it is not only my academic goal, but my further success depends on it.
  • I plan to become an expert in the field of international relations and economics, to participate in international scientific conferences, to make reports and publish them, to work either in international or non-profit organization or in the field of financial consulting.
  • Being wiser than before, I realized that my future I want to develop in this direction.
  • It depends on the Master's program how my career will go on and what will constitute my identity capital.
  • Entering ** University – is a challenge for me and I accept it.

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    • Despite the fact that the world economy and, in particular, international trade and economic relations, are not direct objects of policy studying, they can be considered within it.
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    • Thus, in the context of globalization international economic relations are one of the key areas of research of modern theories of international relations and world politics.
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    • Being a candidate for admission to the master's program, I can not help but look at all opportunities offered by the ** University.
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    • And thirdly, the knowledge gained in the ** University, will enable me to become a competent expert, due to strict requirements for students and development many useful skills.
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    • Master's Program will develop my analytic and statistical capabilities that will also enable me to build a career as a professional economist.
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    • Besides studying economy as a contiguous science with the science of international relations, I am also attracted to become a business and financial consultant.
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    • I have always been inspired by people who are able to develop a financial strategy for the customer, to solve all his financial problems, predict the revenues and expenses of the company, to conduct statistics.
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    • With certainty I can only say that I will always seek for professional growth and self-development and I will make every effort to achieve my goal.
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    • I plan to become an expert in the field of international relations and economics, to participate in international scientific conferences, to make reports and publish them, to work either in international or non-profit organization or in the field of financial consulting.
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