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Every city and every town should have a zoo.

Some people tend to believe that there should be a zoo everywhere.

Others, however, say that it is not necessary that every city and every town should have a zoo.

In my essay I will try to expess my and opposing points of view.

In my opinion,zoos are unimportant part of our life.

There exist many problems to be solved.

It is really essential that mayors of cities and towns should spend money on disposing of urgent problems, but not on building zoos.Health of citizens, their education and living conditions must be the subjects of authority's attention.

Besides, zoos can cause many expenses.

As is known, they take up much space.

It would be useful to build a library where everyone could widen his scope instead of a zoo.

However, some people suppose that zoos educate us.

They say that one takes a wonderful opportunity to see animals.

I disagree with them because animals living in zoos are different from animals in habitat.

Zoos do not educate people because they do not provide an opportunity to watch an animal in nature.

It is artificial knowledge.

In conclusion ,I would say that it is amazing to visit a zoo but there should not be many zoos as there are much more important things in our everyday life.