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Correct me! tell me if something sounds weird.
Nevertheless, who are we to judge whether a life has been well or badly lived?
Life is life, with its charming and unpleasant things.
In truth, there is no purpose beyond the mere act of living.
Accept your fate, embrace your sorrow as you do with your happiness and do not worry too much about being happy, focus on live intensely.

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- Nevertheless, who are we to judge whether a life has been well or badly lived?
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문장 2
- Life is life, with its charming and unpleasant things.
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문장 3
- In truth, there is no purpose beyond the mere act of living.
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문장 4
- Accept your fate, embrace your sorrow as you do with your happiness and do not worry too much about being happy, focus on live intensely.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4