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Hello everyone
Hello!
My name's Berivan I'm 17 years old I'll be 18 on 30.01.
I love speaking English but I cannot speak English very well and one of my biggest dreams is to fly either to London or to New York.
I wish I could make my dream truth.
I would like to be a teeth doctor in the future.
I know I have a lot of aims and dreams but I think everybody has them also.
I'm sure one day my dreams will be truth and everybody's also.
You just have to be a bit able to wait

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- My name's Berivan I'm 17 years old I'll be 18 on 30.01.
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- I love speaking English but I cannot speak English very well and one of my biggest dreams is to fly either to London or to New York.
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- I wish I could make my dream truth.
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- I would like to be a teeth doctor in the future.
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- I know I have a lot of aims and dreams but I think everybody has them also.
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- I'm sure one day my dreams will be truth and everybody's also.
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- You just have to be a bit able to wait
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