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Hi Guys, I'm here to improve my English.
I wish to be fluent in English but I do mistakes and I need vocabulary.
My grammar isn't very well.
:-( It's my friend who has talk to this website.
She lives in Dublin.
Me I live in Paris.
I work and I will Nedd English in my job shorly.

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