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Development 1.
Today a controversial problem that our city is the education.
The lock of education or access to this for the children.
We can see this problem so controversial nowadays with the presence of children on street or working.
Something sad in the 21st century, this we could see next.
Colombia is a country in way of development but has much lock educationally.
This we can be seen in bad results of world's test like the PISA test.
In city as Medellin with digits of 96,6% in schooling (quality of life survey 2009).
This sample that aren't a complete cover of education for many reasons like the drugs, work early and poverty.

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- Today a controversial problem that our city is the education.
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- The lock of education or access to this for the children.
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- We can see this problem so controversial nowadays with the presence of children on street or working.
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- Something sad in the 21st century, this we could see next.
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- Colombia is a country in way of development but has much lock educationally.
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- This we can be seen in bad results of world's test like the PISA test.
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- In city as Medellin with digits of 96,6% in schooling (quality of life survey 2009).
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- This sample that aren't a complete cover of education for many reasons like the drugs, work early and poverty.
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