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  • Discovering the wolrd

  • Hi world, I´m writing this again, because I had to get in again to my count, It doesn´t matter, I´m listening Don´t shoot me Santa (the killers) while I write.
  • My name is Gustavo, I´m Pharmacist Chemist, I live in Perú (ceviche, pisco, Machipicchu, that´s right It is Perú) to be more specific in Callao, near to the beach a little dirty by the pollution, but sometimes the waves and the sun amuse me, I´m 27 and I would like to travel around the world, learning new thing, new friends, new adventures, but for this I need money; I worked in an office and earned my money, but I left everything, less my family (parents and brothers) but the thing It didn´t happen like I wanted, in this moment I´m doing my tesis, a then I don´t know what happen to me, Do you know?, I have two roads, searching a Master degree in Biochemistry in other country (one of the reason that I´m improve my English) or try to get into Medicine University (One of my dreams, I want to die helping people).
  • My favorite band is 30 STM, I love Jared, wait I like the girls, so you shouldn´t to think bad in any way, but is Jared.
  • Well If you can help me with my English, I will teach you Spanish, or If you are lost like me and you know English, edit me rigth now! See you.

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    • Hi world, I´m writing this again, because I had to get in again to my count, It doesn´t matter, I´m listening Don´t shoot me Santa (the killers) while I write.
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    • My name is Gustavo, I´m Pharmacist Chemist, I live in Perú (ceviche, pisco, Machipicchu, that´s right It is Perú) to be more specific in Callao, near to the beach a little dirty by the pollution, but sometimes the waves and the sun amuse me, I´m 27 and I would like to travel around the world, learning new thing, new friends, new adventures, but for this I need money; I worked in an office and earned my money, but I left everything, less my family (parents and brothers) but the thing It didn´t happen like I wanted, in this moment I´m doing my tesis, a then I don´t know what happen to me, Do you know?, I have two roads, searching a Master degree in Biochemistry in other country (one of the reason that I´m improve my English) or try to get into Medicine University (One of my dreams, I want to die helping people).
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    • Well If you can help me with my English, I will teach you Spanish, or If you are lost like me and you know English, edit me rigth now! See you.
      赶紧投票吧!
    • 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4