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Reception
Today i received a dear person to my heart at the airport .
After that we went to the restaurant ate a broiled fish .

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- Reception
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句子 1
- Today i received a dear person to my heart at the airport .
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句子 2
- After that we went to the restaurant ate a broiled fish .
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