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Hello everyone my name is lena , I am 29 years old , I speak arabic very good and I want learning english Because I need for a job .
I want to make friends to practice the language .

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- Hello everyone my name is lena , I am 29 years old , I speak arabic very good and I want learning english Because I need for a job .
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
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- I want to make friends to practice the language .
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2