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Text from Tatiana19 - English

  • A potential job

  • My name is Rebecca Smith.
  • When I saw this advertisment I promptly understood that I match to all standarts.
  • First of all, I'm 23.
  • But I've already had the experience in communication with children as I have four younger brothers and sisters.
  • I'm active and have loads of conceptiins how engage a child.
  • Secondly, I fit in the schedule.
  • Thirdly, as you said jobs available also for sport leaders.
  • It's certainly about me.
  • When I went to school I visited a school swimming pool and I was a captain of basketball team as well.
  • But my real passion is tennis.
  • I have been playing tennis since 10 years old.
  • However my personality is not restricted only by sport skills.
  • I'm a briĺliant cook.
  • My mother learnt me as she is a professional cook and ows a restaraunt.
  • Fourth, don't worry about my English as I'm a native speaker.
  • Furthemore I know Russian and German on the advance level.
  • Finally I promise that you will never regret if you hire me.
  • I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Rebecca

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