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Text from MR-GLOT - English

  • If sport should be or not compulsory at school

  • Dear Mr. John I would like to tell you why I think it is important sport at school and why this subject must be compulsory for all students.
  • At first the sport is a relevant area in our lifes.
  • We sometimes eat unhealthy food and develop bad habits then sport protects us from all of that.
  • Children are continually growing and sport helps them to grow up safe and healthy.
  • Second reason why I consider sport important subject at school it is because they practice any sport at school and then they have the opportunity of learning that sport is good, funny and relaxing.
  • Finally I do not want to end without telling you that sport is a way of interacting and meeting with new people.
  • If you are alone or you do not meet anyone sport helps you to talk with others, get new friends and new enjoyable situations.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English