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  • Conclusion of my presentation

  • As a conclusion, behind the democratic framework that bears, Russia has a strong and powerful executive endorsed by the authoritarian president Putin.
  • But all the criticisms that come to our minds when we think about Russia's democracy are influenced by our occidental position.
  • We constantly hear that Putin is a dictator and so we barely understand how he can be so popular in his country.
  • The main explanation we usually find is that Putin's propaganda is working more than it should be.
  • But finally, the main question that we should be asking is : isn't more the russian population's desire and appeal for charismatic and authoritarian leaders who govern with an iron hand that make Putin so popular?
  • Moreover, Putin is essentially seen as the guy who got the chaotic Russia of the 90's back on its feet and the people are grateful to him.
  • Russian's worst nightmare is to be back to a complete loss of control and order such as was the case after the fall of the USSR.

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    • As a conclusion, behind the democratic framework that bears, Russia has a strong and powerful executive endorsed by the authoritarian president Putin.
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    • But all the criticisms that come to our minds when we think about Russia's democracy are influenced by our occidental position.
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    • But finally, the main question that we should be asking is : isn't more the russian population's desire and appeal for charismatic and authoritarian leaders who govern with an iron hand that make Putin so popular?
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    • Moreover, Putin is essentially seen as the guy who got the chaotic Russia of the 90's back on its feet and the people are grateful to him.
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    • Russian's worst nightmare is to be back to a complete loss of control and order such as was the case after the fall of the USSR.
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