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  • problem with new technologies.

  • Young people have been born in a period where it is completely normal to use phones, tablets, and computers and so on.
  • They do not realize how dangerous it may become and society doesn’t forbid it.
  • Young people are losing communicating skills and they are becoming addicted to new technologies without they realize.
  • Nowadays, it’s considered normal use phone but what happens when you use it an average of 4 hours per day?
  • Or when you feel a necessity of checking your phone.
  • All those things are occurring to our young population when they use new technology.
  • They get used to talking with friends or even flirting through phone, so they are losing communicating abilities.
  • They are worse than us treating with people face-to-face and culture is helping all that process.
  • In spite of government is working on stopping it is not an easy problem and population must be more awake about this big trouble.

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