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從levrano來的文本 - English

  • Hello world!

  • Hi, my name is Ruslan.
  • This is main fyrst attempt at writing.
  • I`m live in South Ural in a industrial city Chelyabinsk.
  • I`m working the programmer.

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English