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Formal letter
Dear Sir, I'm writing in connection with your advertisement about English course in newspaper.
I'm ready to sign up.
I need more information about teaching methods.
Firstly do you teach Callan method?
Secondly I need learn business English.
Is it possible in your school?
If you repeat "yes" two times I'll have next questions.
When your course will start?
I want attend to intermediate group.
Please send me your leaflet and telephone number.
Your faithfully

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- Dear Sir, I'm writing in connection with your advertisement about English course in newspaper.
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- I'm ready to sign up.
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- I need more information about teaching methods.
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- Firstly do you teach Callan method?
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- Secondly I need learn business English.
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- Is it possible in your school?
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- If you repeat "yes" two times I'll have next questions.
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- When your course will start?
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- I want attend to intermediate group.
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- Please send me your leaflet and telephone number.
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- Your faithfully
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