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Formal letter
Dear Sir, I'm writing in connection with your advertisement about English course in newspaper.
I'm ready to sign up.
I need more information about teaching methods.
Firstly do you teach Callan method?
Secondly I need learn business English.
Is it possible in your school?
If you repeat "yes" two times I'll have next questions.
When your course will start?
I want attend to intermediate group.
Please send me your leaflet and telephone number.
Your faithfully

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- Formal letter
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문장 1
- Dear Sir, I'm writing in connection with your advertisement about English course in newspaper.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I'm ready to sign up.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- I need more information about teaching methods.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- Firstly do you teach Callan method?
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- Secondly I need learn business English.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Is it possible in your school?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6
문장 7
- If you repeat "yes" two times I'll have next questions.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
문장 8
- When your course will start?
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
문장 9
- I want attend to intermediate group.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
문장 10
- Please send me your leaflet and telephone number.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
문장 11
- Your faithfully
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 11